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Ouch That Hurts

Pain is so debilitating Pain is incapacitating Tablets many to be taken Balm to gently calm an excruciating pain I have in my right arm Oh how it makes you realise How much one needs both arms When one no longer works with such pain it really hurts So I pray these tablets help For everytime I move I yelp Cannot even brush my hair To dress myself ~ well I despair Pain I beg please go away Pain I have both night and day Makes me think of those poor souls Whose pain will never go away No tablets help No balms can cure Constant pain for they endure I pray one day that they will be Like you and me they’ll be pain free Written 26th October ~ after suffering a great deal of pain in my right arm making it impossible for to use at all…
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:34:00 PM
Telling the pain to please go away is really beautiul. Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:54:00 PM
Many thanks my friend ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/27/2021 12:56:00 AM
As we grow older we suffer from all aches and pains. Usually it's my hip bone. Great poem.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/27/2021 3:11:00 PM
Many thanks Victor, yes getting older is not much fun... glad you liked my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/26/2021 2:41:00 PM
Ann, wonderful write and is that your writing arm? Get well soon ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/27/2021 3:12:00 PM
Aww thank you so much dear Constance for your kind words ~ yes it is my writing arm that is so painful. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/26/2021 12:36:00 PM
Sending you healing prayers and blessings! Ouch is right!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/27/2021 3:07:00 PM
Bless you dear Sam and thank you for your prayers... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/26/2021 12:32:00 PM
So sorry to hear that Ann, hope you are soon on the mend. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/27/2021 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I hope so too... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

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