Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Ouch That Hurts

  
Pain is
so debilitating
Pain is
incapacitating

Tablets 
many to be taken
Balm
to gently calm
an excruciating pain
I have in my right arm

Oh how it makes you realise
How much one needs both arms
When one no longer works
with such pain it really hurts

So I pray these tablets help
For everytime I move I yelp
Cannot even brush my hair
To dress myself ~ well I despair

Pain 
I beg please go away
Pain I have
both night and day

Makes me think of those poor souls
Whose pain will never go away
No tablets help
No balms can cure
Constant pain for they endure
I pray one day 
that they will be
Like you and me 
they’ll be pain free

Written 26th October ~ after suffering a great deal of pain in my right arm making it impossible for to use at all…
  

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Christuraj Alex January 24, 2022 at 5:34 PM Telling the pain to please go away is really beautiul. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour February 8, 2022 at 11:54 PM Many thanks my friend ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar October 27, 2021 at 12:56 AM As we grow older we suffer from all aches and pains. Usually it's my hip bone. Great poem. Ann Gilmour October 27, 2021 at 3:11 PM Many thanks Victor, yes getting older is not much fun... glad you liked my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France October 26, 2021 at 2:41 PM Ann, wonderful write and is that your writing arm? Get well soon ~ love and serenity _Constance Ann Gilmour October 27, 2021 at 3:12 PM Aww thank you so much dear Constance for your kind words ~ yes it is my writing arm that is so painful. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman October 26, 2021 at 12:36 PM Sending you healing prayers and blessings! Ouch is right! Ann Gilmour October 27, 2021 at 3:07 PM Bless you dear Sam and thank you for your prayers... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2021 at 12:32 PM So sorry to hear that Ann, hope you are soon on the mend. Tom Ann Gilmour October 27, 2021 at 3:06 PM Thank you Tom, I hope so too... with kindest thoughts Ann xx