Annie Lander Poet I do not know?

Ouch Low Battery

Low battery

In the wee hours of the morn
She was torn between two pillows;
  Pure ecstasy escalates;
 A blinking Indicator become
A disruptive behavior: suddenly
 A dishonorable discharge

 ouch! sorry low battery.

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Harry Horsman September 2, 2012 at 3:07 PM enjoyed this clever poem, different.

Laila Andresen Mjelde August 29, 2012 at 6:24 PM nice poem...lol...funny!! Hugs - Laila

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2012 at 11:44 AM Like your humor in this little verse Annie. Come and read my "Three heads" it's also fun. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary August 29, 2012 at 11:16 AM Hmmm... funny to read... but maybe disappointing at the time... ;-) Terry (nice poem) Annie Lander August 29, 2012 at 11:31 AM just a little humour Terry O/Leary..Irish name one love annie