'ouch It Hurts'- Collaboration

Once, a girl in my tip-top prime was I,
not much sleep needed after a lullaby-
contoured figure with toned legs and buns,
gym at 6am just to show off my guns.
Now morns are as rough as a sty in my eye.

Rising early can be so unbearable, 
but back then it wasn’t so terrible-
I’d leap with a pep in my step with a tune
in my head awaiting my nap at noon.
Now that alarm I hear is not comparable!

“OUCH! IT HURTS!” that buzzing sound.
The unrelenting noise does astound
me when I try my best to get up early morn,
eyes water and my forlorn body worn. 
No time for laundry when your bed bound.

In the summer I awake at almost one,
demanding nights, so much to get done!
I used to be able to sleep much less,
now darkness in the morn does cause stress-
I can’t stand rising earlier than the sun!



for contest COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier
August 10, 2019
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations, Lu on your well deserved win. So true, last two lines.
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 1:16 PM
thank you sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Yes for sure, waking up to the sound of an alarm does hurt. Congrats on your win, Lu Loo.
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 1:16 PM
thank you for my placement lovely Line, I am honroed :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 3:38 PM
I really feel ya, because that is one of my major problems too. GREAT job. I am very confused by this contest. I hope I can come up with something.
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:03 PM
it was confusing for me too, you are not alone! thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 5:38 PM
This is so much fun. Good luck in the contest.
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:02 PM
thanks dear Richard :)-luloo
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