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My young baby roo I love and protect
He's a bit of a kicker and a fidget
He lives safely inside my kangaroo pouch
With stronger kicks felt, ouch! I cry out.

As little ones do, he won't keep very still
For my body ache pains, the vet pops me a pill
Roo pushes and twists while awake or asleep
Power kick gifts, from his little long feet.

High jumper or boxer he could turn out to be
Up pops his head, his new world to see
Ouch! another kick; again to my ribs
A sudden spring jump, he's out from his crib.

Jumping, exploring, very much excited
In-out play; then back in pouch basket
Not one for climbing in or out gently
Always kick butting, my poor sore belly.

A grown boy now, he'll be leaving home soon
No more protection from mums tum cocoon
My ouch in my pouch, my baby roo joey
If human he'd win; gold Olympic jump glory.



"O" Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest

Sponsor  Constance La France 

Written   23.09.21

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/5/2021 7:55:00 AM
Emilia, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this wonderful and delightful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/27/2021 11:19:00 AM
This is delightful Emilia and so very creative. Wonderful rhymes of the marsupial "mum!" Great take on the contest theme! Kids would love this one! Hearty congratulations and high fives!
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Date: 9/27/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much Sam, this piece was fun to write. *high fives* back. Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2021 10:54:00 PM
Great poem on the son. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/25/2021 2:53:00 AM
Thank you kindly Christuraj. Have an enjoyable weekend. Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2021 6:18:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... nice personification of a mother kangaroo and her joey. Been close by a number of Mums and watched her joey climb in and out of the pouch - thanks for your enjoyable poem Emilia - Lindsay
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Date: 9/25/2021 2:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindsay. They are beautiful. Hope your weekend goes well. Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2021 11:20:00 AM
So beautiful Emilia... with a cute picture... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/25/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thank you Ani, have a good weekend. Emilia : )

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