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sunset sea beach rocks lighthouse landscape wallpaper

Otherworldly

otherworldly beauty;
 outstanding view of beach
        on tropical island.
 observing waves crashing
  on jagged rocks, explode.
    overzealous starlings,
      optical treat in sky!


Submitted for...
Pleiades O Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman 
Date written: 04/03/2021

And for...
Look At This Place! Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
Date written: 04/03/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 11:54 AM
"Oh" observational beauty with delightful optics Edward! Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Caliri Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Congrats on your finish in my contest...loved this small, powerful write.
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so much for my placement and the congrats, Matt:-) Most obliged.
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much, Sara:-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:00 PM
glad to be back with big congrats!!
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Thanks again, Andrea:-) God bless you, my friend!
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:50 PM
A creative choice of words to describe, Edward! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:21 PM
Great write, Edward, congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Eve:-) Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:24 PM
One of the prettiest ones I have read!
Ibeh Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Nice description of the picture. It truly is other worldly. Good luck in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Thank you very much, Eileen:-) I appreciate the visit and best wishes. Happy Easter!
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:32 AM
fabulous description Edward, good luck in the contests:-) hugs jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Jan:-) Most obliged.
Hankins Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Nice work, Edward. It's a fine description of the picture. GL in both contests!
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Thank you so much, L.Milton:-) Most appreciated.
Y. Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Hi Edward, This is such a beautiful entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Thank you very much for the best wishes, Alexis! Have a great Easter!:-)
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Your "O" words evoke the images, Edward ---a painting brush-stroked brilliantly.
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 3:07 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay!:-)
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