Sam Keshavarz Amandi Poet Free verse

Other People Says That's Wrong

other people says wrong Whatever you do 
The society's answer is punishment because they look at it
Before your eyes and ears is the only way
Your path is always polled

Do not sit under the burden of these criticisms
Focus on your progress and creativity
The reason for your success is you, not others
You should not let yourself be taken away from you

Believe that whatever you do
It can be a way for you to progress
Not just what other people say
But what you feel yourself

So keep going and overcome the criticism
Be with yourself and move forward with confidence
Nothing is great until it begins
Believe that you can do anything you want

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Christina Bowring August 26, 2023 at 11:10 PM A poem full of profound wisdom Hossein. I love the line,’You should not let yourself be taken away from you.’ Inspiring. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. Sam Keshavarz Amandi August 28, 2023 at 7:56 AM Thank you very much for reading this poem and your attention and your opinion

Lady Labyrinth August 26, 2023 at 12:00 AM My sentiments exactly. Most of the time it is best to detach from the negative criticism; you can take on the positive criticism, but at the end of the day with regard to your own progess in creativity and in life, there is only one voice within you that has the answers. That being said, there are two places you need to go often: the place that heals you; and the place that inspires you. A deep and profound poem you have written here. Thank you for sharing. Lady Labyrinth August 28, 2023 at 9:16 PM this ... "So keep going and overcome the criticism Be with yourself and move forward with confidence Nothing is great until it begins Believe that you can do anything you want" Sam Keshavarz Amandi August 26, 2023 at 12:37 AM Dear Lady, thank you for your attention to the meaning of the poem, which is for a better life.