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Other People Says That's Wrong

other people says wrong Whatever you do The society's answer is punishment because they look at it Before your eyes and ears is the only way Your path is always polled Do not sit under the burden of these criticisms Focus on your progress and creativity The reason for your success is you, not others You should not let yourself be taken away from you Believe that whatever you do It can be a way for you to progress Not just what other people say But what you feel yourself So keep going and overcome the criticism Be with yourself and move forward with confidence Nothing is great until it begins Believe that you can do anything you want

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Christina Bowring

Date: 8/26/2023 11:10:00 PM

A poem full of profound wisdom Hossein. I love the line,’You should not let yourself be taken away from you.’ Inspiring. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

Sam Keshavarz Amandi
Date: 8/28/2023 7:56:00 AM

Thank you very much for reading this poem and your attention and your opinion

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/26/2023 12:00:00 AM

My sentiments exactly. Most of the time it is best to detach from the negative criticism; you can take on the positive criticism, but at the end of the day with regard to your own progess in creativity and in life, there is only one voice within you that has the answers. That being said, there are two places you need to go often: the place that heals you; and the place that inspires you. A deep and profound poem you have written here. Thank you for sharing.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/28/2023 9:16:00 PM

this ... "So keep going and overcome the criticism Be with yourself and move forward with confidence Nothing is great until it begins Believe that you can do anything you want"

Sam Keshavarz Amandi
Date: 8/26/2023 12:37:00 AM

Dear Lady, thank you for your attention to the meaning of the poem, which is for a better life.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/20/2023 11:53:00 AM

Nice poem of self-love and drive Hossein

Sam Keshavarz Amandi
Date: 8/21/2023 6:27:00 AM

Dear Tom, Thank you for your attention