Osprey

I ventured out one day to bird watch in the woods
I saw a new path to take near the tree where I stood
I walked for several miles and could smell fragrant flowers
Not sure how far I have gone but I’ve walked for hours

I could smell forest moss and hear faint sounds of running water
I followed the sounds hoping to see a blue heron or even some otters
I walked a few more miles and stopped when I saw a great white egret 
It’s always rewarding to walk for miles to see these birds, no regrets

I followed the egret until I came upon a beautiful cascading waterfall
I then saw a quick glimpse of a rare osprey, and heard his shrill calls
I sat by the water taking in the beauty, it was very beautiful, picturesque
To my delight, I then spotted the osprey above the waterfall in his huge nest

9/22/19

Contest: Picturesque Rhyme Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:08 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I could see the osprey and the egret in my mind as I was reading your poem.
Kitchin Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Thank you Caren! :)
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:15 PM
what absolutely gorgeous imagery Tania, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Thank you Jan! :) hugs
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Tania congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific write!
Kitchin Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Thank you Constance! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest :) - A beautiful poem, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:31 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Tania! : ) xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Connie! :)
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Great poem, Tania. Thank you for your support in my contest. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Eve, and thank you for my placement! :)
Laurie Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Hello Tania … nothing like feeling the experience of espying a bird for the first time. My experience was with a Beautiful Firefinch Finch - thank you Tania - Lindsay
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Lindsay!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 5:07 PM
What a lovely walk!
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Kim! :)
Michael Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:49 AM
I like the creativity...
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thank you!
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