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Osprey

I ventured out one day to bird watch in the woods I saw a new path to take near the tree where I stood I walked for several miles and could smell fragrant flowers Not sure how far I have gone but I’ve walked for hours I could smell forest moss and hear faint sounds of running water I followed the sounds hoping to see a blue heron or even some otters I walked a few more miles and stopped when I saw a great white egret It’s always rewarding to walk for miles to see these birds, no regrets I followed the egret until I came upon a beautiful cascading waterfall I then saw a quick glimpse of a rare osprey, and heard his shrill calls I sat by the water taking in the beauty, it was very beautiful, picturesque To my delight, I then spotted the osprey above the waterfall in his huge nest 9/22/19 Contest: Picturesque Rhyme Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 9/27/2019 2:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I could see the osprey and the egret in my mind as I was reading your poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/27/2019 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Caren! :)
Date: 9/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
what absolutely gorgeous imagery Tania, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/26/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :) hugs
Date: 9/26/2019 5:07:00 PM
Tania congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific write!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/26/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Constance! :)
Date: 9/26/2019 8:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest :) - A beautiful poem, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/26/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 9/26/2019 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Tania! : ) xxoo
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/26/2019 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Connie! :)
Date: 9/25/2019 10:40:00 PM
Great poem, Tania. Thank you for your support in my contest. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/26/2019 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Eve, and thank you for my placement! :)
Date: 9/22/2019 8:08:00 PM
Hello Tania … nothing like feeling the experience of espying a bird for the first time. My experience was with a Beautiful Firefinch Finch - thank you Tania - Lindsay
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/22/2019 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay!
Date: 9/22/2019 5:07:00 PM
What a lovely walk!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/22/2019 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Kim! :)
Date: 9/22/2019 11:49:00 AM
I like the creativity...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/22/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thank you!

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