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Oh hermit, imbibe bliss osmotically now, offering God our heart, outpouring compassion, orbiting the love pulse omnipresent, shifting opaque veils of ego. 03-April-2021 Pleiades O poetry contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 7 lines starting with ‘O’, each line 6 syllables

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Date: 4/9/2021 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 4/7/2021 2:59:00 PM
A unique O word with great imagery, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! These contests are entertaining, aren’t they?
Date: 4/7/2021 1:50:00 PM
Happy to come back with congratulations on your placement~
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Michelle!
Date: 4/7/2021 1:48:00 PM
Unseeking Seeker, very creative description of osmosis! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Kim! Was happy to try out this new format
Date: 4/7/2021 5:35:00 AM
Brilliant write..Congratulations Unseeking...
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 4/6/2021 10:20:00 PM
Great write, US , congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 4/5/2021 2:22:00 PM
Such compelling mystery, that last line simply gorgeous, I agree with Caren, it should take the top prize!
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Date: 4/5/2021 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Michelle! A sneak peek reveals some great (better) entries for this contest already!
Date: 4/5/2021 12:23:00 PM
Good luck in the contest; as far as I can see, this one is going straight to the top to collect the golden ticket!
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Date: 4/5/2021 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I enjoy trying out new poetry forms

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