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Osmosis

Oh hermit, imbibe bliss
osmotically now,
offering God our heart,
outpouring compassion,
orbiting the love pulse
omnipresent, shifting
opaque veils of ego.

03-April-2021

Pleiades O poetry contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman

7 lines starting with ‘O’, each line 6 syllables

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2021 at 2:58 PM Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara Unseeking Seeker April 9, 2021 at 7:14 PM Thank you, Sara! :)

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2021 at 2:59 PM A unique O word with great imagery, Congrats on your win. Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2021 at 7:34 PM Thanks Andrea! These contests are entertaining, aren’t they?

Michelle Faulkner April 7, 2021 at 1:50 PM Happy to come back with congratulations on your placement~ Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2021 at 7:33 PM Thank you Michelle!

Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:48 PM Unseeking Seeker, very creative description of osmosis! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2021 at 7:33 PM Thank you Kim! Was happy to try out this new format

JC Brul April 7, 2021 at 5:35 AM Brilliant write..Congratulations Unseeking... Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2021 at 7:35 AM Thank you, JCB!

Eve Roper April 6, 2021 at 10:20 PM Great write, US , congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2021 at 3:21 AM Thank you Eve!

Michelle Faulkner April 5, 2021 at 2:22 PM Such compelling mystery, that last line simply gorgeous, I agree with Caren, it should take the top prize! Unseeking Seeker April 5, 2021 at 7:13 PM Thanks Michelle! A sneak peek reveals some great (better) entries for this contest already!

Caren Krutsinger April 5, 2021 at 12:23 PM Good luck in the contest; as far as I can see, this one is going straight to the top to collect the golden ticket! Unseeking Seeker April 5, 2021 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Caren! I enjoy trying out new poetry forms