Oscar
It was the MSN message boards,
where I fell into accord
with a kind soul, known as Oscar.
Without him, I'd never have dared,
to venture out, my soul to share.
Writing of my tears and laughter.
Though, only seen upon a screen,
his words meant more, than it seems.
Encouraging me, in writing verse.
His soft critiques and nice comments,
helping me to experiment.
Looking back, he really saw my worst.
Kind words for all who posted there,
we'd come from here and everywhere.
Gladly sharing a piece of ourselves.
Everyday, magically appeared,
the one, I came so to revere.
Helping all to see within themselves.
His patience, humor and respect,
within my heart, I have kept.
With poetry, we formed a kinship.
I wouldn't be here, now, today,
writing in different forms and ways,
had it not been for his friendship.
Dedicated to Delfin Canedo,
Oscar to his MSN friends
~Paula Swanson
Best Dedication Poem contest
Placement: 10th
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