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Oscar

It was the MSN message boards, where I fell into accord with a kind soul, known as Oscar. Without him, I'd never have dared, to venture out, my soul to share. Writing of my tears and laughter. Though, only seen upon a screen, his words meant more, than it seems. Encouraging me, in writing verse. His soft critiques and nice comments, helping me to experiment. Looking back, he really saw my worst. Kind words for all who posted there, we'd come from here and everywhere. Gladly sharing a piece of ourselves. Everyday, magically appeared, the one, I came so to revere. Helping all to see within themselves. His patience, humor and respect, within my heart, I have kept. With poetry, we formed a kinship. I wouldn't be here, now, today, writing in different forms and ways, had it not been for his friendship. Dedicated to Delfin Canedo, Oscar to his MSN friends ~Paula Swanson Best Dedication Poem contest Placement: 10th

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Date: 7/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:20:00 PM
Many congrats on all your recent wins, Paula : )
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Paula. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations Paula for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:21:00 AM
great dedication to a friend. My Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D...Hugs
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! i wish I had someone who had encouraged me like this. sounds wonderful :)
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your exciting win with this sensitive entry written so tenderly my friend.. very touching luv..
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:10:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Paula
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Date: 11/30/2010 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for the alert. I added my name. Thanks, Paula
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:03:00 AM
Nice inspiration you got from Oscar to develop the literary talents you had, Good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:03:00 AM
An awesome dedication to Oscar. Loved the flow of your words.
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:46:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to a mentor and muse Paula who excited your gift to share with us all.. like the three line verses on this one too my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:46:00 PM
He sounds wonderful, Paula. It's nice to meet people who stay great friends with you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:35:00 PM
I LIKE THIS, MAKES ME FEEL WARM INSIDE, HOPE I CAN FIND THE SAME
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