Orphaned

I.
I
My,my
ego's cry-
neglected,long lost
family..duties..left to die,
fixated on symptoms society still wonders why !

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/20/2009 10:51:00 PM

Very well said and penned, it's a wonderful write, Mr. Strand. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2009 6:53:00 PM

Sometimes it is hard to concentrate on anything but the symptoms of our confounding society. Again, so much said in so few words. Your poem takes my breath away! Love, Carolyn

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/7/2009 4:42:00 PM

LOVE this. I. such a little huge thing; so unassuming, and yet all there is. this is awesome, Brian. and so true. love, Kristin

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/7/2009 10:35:00 AM

Wonderful write and so true of today and still the autorocities go on! Thanks for your welcome comments, smiles, Anna-Marie.

David Smalling

Date: 5/7/2009 9:21:00 AM

my orphaned eye disconnected from me enters to find what is left when self falls apart ... and stand before your talent in awe.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/7/2009 6:39:00 AM

Teacher perfect ... fixated on symptoms society still wonders why ! congratulations always.

P Sheart

Date: 5/7/2009 6:30:00 AM

Hi Brian This really tugs at my heart strings. Sad but deep seeded in its inspiring truth. With few words you say sooo very much. So great! Love Light Truth Patricia

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/7/2009 6:22:00 AM

Wonderful! Just brilliant writing Brian! Hugs. :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/7/2009 5:43:00 AM

Wow. Brilliant way to get a message across! Superb writing Brian, although its truth is pretty depressing. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/7/2009 4:18:00 AM

This another write speaks deeply Brian...so much truth in your words ..words that are very effective in getting the mind to think. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/7/2009 12:46:00 AM

A powerful write with so much passion and soul poured out in just a few lines. So much truth and sadness here. Great writing friend. Smiles from Lolita

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