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Orphaned

Paint a picture in 10 words exactly.


Destitute 
Derelict
Despondent
Huddled wrapped
Cornered, wind abates
Infant slumbers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2009 5:06:00 PM
Quite the picture here !! Reminds me of babies found in dumpsters ... gruesome world!
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:49:00 AM
Brilliant my dear! Such a portrait you paint with so few carefully selected words!! Best wishes, Keith
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