Orphan In the Dock

(Before Sentencing.)

They called him ‘Poor Boy’
a victim of life’s promise...
a voice without love
neither percipient of
nor an indulgence in it.


© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Song Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 6:13 PM
The part that breaks my heart is the "voice without love." Appreciate this succinct message..my mother was an orphan.. :) gwendolen
Johnson Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 10:13 AM
A native alien, is how I came to say it. Someone who's home was meant to roam. With nobody to share it. Maybe you would like to read my native alien.
Onclaud Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 5:17 AM
well scribed, harry..so thought provoking and deep!...:) huggs
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October 31, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Hello Harry, loving your tanka, stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 2:47 PM
a true person. thanks for letting me know.
Yamin Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 1:14 PM
A superb Tanka. No doubt orphans are victims of life's promise. Thanks for your admiration of my poem Prayers Answered. You are so right. Faith is surely the binding factor of the virtuous people of the world. However, there are a few supporters of evil that are the prime cause of creating prejudice and divide. Our job is to frustrate their evil design. Regards
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:34 AM
INTENSE WORDS TUG AT THE INNER CORE HARRY LUV .. HOPE U WILL READ MY BLOG TODAY .. AM HAVING SO MANY PROBLEMS COMMENTING REPLIES TO ALL MY POET FRIENDS ..OH
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Thanks for filling me in somewhat about the subject of this poem...Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Very touching write. Well penned. Tfs
Nair Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Victim of life's promise..., very nice, thnx for stopping by!! Jag
Johnson Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 2:17 AM
our world is hell, if where you dwell, pain and suffering is near, no need to go to Satans hell, it's a bit more subtle here... keep em coming mate, first rate...
Komala Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 12:10 AM
very beautiful written tanka..thank you Harry for your great work...so touching ...<3<3<3 SK
Poet Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 8:27 PM
An interesting Tanka here harry.I think Andrea is correct.He was unfairly imprisioned.
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 3:52 PM
So sad .... everyone needs love, just as important as water and bread - very well written Harry. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Interesting work..Need more information..Fill me in about the topic..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara..Internet and phone been down again today..
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Harry, this makes me want to know more of him. It sounds like he was unfairly sentenced. Is it based on a true story? Good to see a new poem from you today!
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October 30, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Good poem, Harry! Our 'humanity' has its limits, unfortunately... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)
Bordner Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Reminds me of the iherent iniquity of Maritime-Admiralty Law - poor boys often become the strongest men - I respect the soft, wise splash of your new canvas Harry - J.A.B. %
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October 30, 2012 at 9:58 AM
so sad and true harry xx
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October 30, 2012 at 9:25 AM
Tear comes not from only eyes but also from real heart. Such sad reality happens in this world to many. My sweet friend of real holy heart. Loved always, bl
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