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Orion Constellation

bright stars close but afar distinct in the winter sky 'the hunter' chases his night prey as couples roll on sand. Olusegun Arowolo DATE:07-07-2012 CONTEST:"Pen a Pensee" sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2012 1:59:00 PM

Very great one that you have written..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/9/2012 12:33:00 AM

Now this is a warm and romantic write...are u in love? Being love always spurs such outstanding creativity! (ok, smack me if u wish...I just had to say that!) Nette will be totally impressed...the last 2 lines are so strong....take care, Olusegun! gwendolen

Tanya Harrington

Date: 7/7/2012 12:44:00 PM

A wonderful write. Good luck! :) Tanya

Kash Poet

Date: 7/7/2012 12:23:00 PM

Beautifuly crafted Pensee here By you Olusegun.Love the imagery.Best wishes to you.