Jackie Kinsey Poet Rhyme

Originality

Feeling invisible
Mabey cause I'm original
Yes all the issues i've endured
Will leave my life a pinnicle
Good people are like me
Other people they tire me
Wanna keep my attention
Then find a way to inspire me
Mabey its easier being able to look through
So then nobody can ever know whos the real you
Stuntin on blank hoes letting the world know
That nobody can ever call me artificial
So here we go on a road of temptation
When you think about fate and destiny
There's no relation
You wanna go out and be something on your own time
You gotta grind out here so baby let ya heart shine
All of us right now are here to tell a story
Want me to show you how
Then put me in the glory
Ill let some light shine on you give you some faith
So then well all have some victor that we can taste

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Skat A June 13, 2016 at 3:43 PM Jackie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Moon Flower June 13, 2016 at 11:47 AM That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jackie. :)

Poet Destroyer A June 12, 2016 at 9:15 PM Well done 16 year-old Jackie, :):):), Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jackie Kinsey June 12, 2016 at 7:52 PM I'm only 16...still learning but I like to write about my life and motivations. I have a poem I wrote about my relationship with my mother. if you all would like to see it plz comment on my poems and let me know