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Originality

We’ve got originality
and street credibility
in this sincere society.
If you’re in a confused community
filled with cursed celebrity
who’s got hot hostility
-We can fix your hospitality
with the pens in this poetry city
Yeah, we’ve got eternal eligibility
 A fair forte… a facility
built with trust and tenacity
…just playing with words… sincerity.
 Truly, poetrysoup is a strong city
built on creativity… originality

Copyright © Adeleke Adeite | Year Posted 2009

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Jack Kenny Date: 7/21/2009 1:10:00 PM Hello Adeleke, I really like this poem and the clever way you worked in poetrysoup, keep up the good flowiing work... Jack Login to Reply

Lena Pate Date: 7/11/2009 8:07:00 PM Original and sincere. The words of a poet are stronger and more potent with the healing power to overcome hate, abuse or hostility. As the old saying goes, "the pen is mightier than the sword." Nicely written. Login to Reply

Shannon O'Leary Date: 6/13/2009 10:52:00 AM I really like this poem. It really rings true! Thanks for your comment about my poem titled Feeling Peace. I really appreciate it! Login to Reply

Colin Mitchell Williams Date: 6/10/2009 5:42:00 AM Hi Adeleke... a great person once said "originality is the art of concealing the source" Its a very clever poem and well written, liked it very much Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 6/4/2009 5:04:00 AM Love this ... I think of it as an original alliteration of rhymes ... I love writers who search for new ways and forms to tell old truths. Love. Login to Reply