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Original Sin To Insanity

his child crime started petty ~ stealing red apples from bordering trees his adult crime knows no bounds ~ red’s now invading bordering countries if red’s not faced down by us all ~ his madness will border world war three By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/1/2022 12:25:00 PM

So so so scary sad and very true David. Peace in our time Appeasement No I don't think so Merely a pit stop , then on to the next orchid once all the apples on the tree have been mined. Great fantastic synopsis as ever Sir

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/1/2022 12:48:00 PM

Also grows even more dangerous given thing's do not seem to be going his way

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/1/2022 12:47:00 PM

So would I David Such a narcissist though he wouldn't kill himself so pray hopefully the nuclear option is off the table

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/1/2022 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Christopher, this guy is living in the last century, if he thinks the world will bow before him, I’d rather take my chances with nuclear option, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/1/2022 12:29:00 PM

David i read your comment you left on my poem thank you. And I answered it with a question I would be grateful if you would answer please from your wise independent perspective

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/27/2022 12:19:00 AM

From apples to big chunks of land, quite a leap. I might have 'scrumped' a few apples in my youth but stopped at that. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/27/2022 12:40:00 AM

We all did as kids Tom, back in those days it was almost a right of passage, but this Putin already has all the power and wealth in the Russia, and absolutely no need to invade Ukraine, so I’m guessing he’s a psychopathic megalomaniac and a very dangerous one at that, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 2/26/2022 4:22:00 PM

How prophetic this poem may be. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us, David. Our world seems to be at a precipice. God help us, before we destroy his beautiful creation. Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/26/2022 10:12:00 PM

Thank you Bill, One way or another Putin must be stopped, he’s hoping the spectre of WW3 will keep him safe, but I’m not so sure, the world must stand united now, and not give another inch to him, cheers David