James Horn Poet Couplet

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This poem sure hits home with me;
To write, it took some time.
It proves again as you can see,
That the best ones always rhyme.

Gene Lakin,
My Next Door Neighbor

Like a good beer, it hit the spot
Outside when it had been hot
In my mind together things are meshing
And write this poem which is refreshing.

Jim Horn
My Response to Gene

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Brenda Meier-Hans October 13, 2014 at 9:41 PM Bahaha, did someone drink a couple beer or what Happened. I love it lol so here's a 7 for fun. James Horn October 14, 2014 at 8:32 AM We did have an afternoon beer. Of course, this was a practical joke with a purpose in mind which was to encourage Gene to Join Poetry Soup. This has to be under 400 characters. Jim Horn

James Horn October 13, 2014 at 6:46 PM This is the worse poem I ever read in my whole life so I only gave it a one out 7 being the best. Jim Horn James Horn October 13, 2014 at 6:48 PM Wonder what Gene thinks about that. Jim Horn