Origin

Origin and existence are dark as soot
probably things exist before  originating
what humans know is that they know not
that even known things are falsely known

Stars in sky are hardly known by humans
maybe they exist before they originate
Certain things exist as the unknown
they hide somewhere from human mind

God has no origin humans claim to know
but can’t humans know  hidden things?
if another God exists in rivalry with God
Could that God reveal God’s hidden origin?

Everything on earth hides truth from humans
Only God knows all- even His own birthday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Nice poem! I know I' too small to know much at all, except that that all that beauty I see is beautiful and I love that those stars took so long to deliver their light. A 7 from me
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Encouraging remarks, Thank you, Maureen.
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