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origami stillness pervaded the ancient paper home not even the rill that dutifully crossed the small garden dared to break the meditative silence. a controlled swish of heavy white paper whispered through the open doors and rested on the water lilies folded like his paper creatures the aged man sat unmoving except for his waltzing fingers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/2/2017 6:21:00 AM
I like this very much! Nicely done Patricia. I also learned a new word from this (Rill).
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/2/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem.

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