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 ammended 2nd nov 2011.
again 22 oct 2013
Oh! vagrant life, your motive unknown, for what do you acknowledge me? and why am i a pawn? why fix un-broken entity's? why lead to deep desire? and overpowering uncertainty through all vanity, yet to be..' immolated in eternity's fire.."

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Date: 5/16/2012 5:27:00 AM
Beautifully composed, Joe, but has a forlorn and abandonned air? A soulful write, to be sure! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:26:00 AM
Beautifully composed, Joe, but has a forlorn and abandonned aire? A soulful write, to be sure! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 2/6/2011 12:32:00 AM
Very interesting one, Joe. Where did you come up with oriflame? I have not heard this expression before.
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:05:00 PM
I like the line "and overpowering uncertainty"...This is everpresent in our country now ...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Your presence at my work was just the spark that I needed this eve..Sara
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Date: 10/13/2010 12:42:00 PM
I don't think Edgar Allen Poe could have said it any better, Joe. Excellnt poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/13/2010 9:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this beautiful morning Joe. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2010 1:16:00 PM
sad thoughts...saccrificed for brinstone
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