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Heeding the cries of the poor and needy, Feeding all when I have nothing plenty; Kneading evil-doers who are weedy, Pleading to the Almighty for bounty. Greed, the great vice, be purged out of myself, Freed from this life of bondage so tiresome; Reed-like may Spirit flow on giving joys. Creed should not my existence overcome… 08 June 2021 Lento - 8 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 6/9/2021 10:07:00 AM
Hi Christuraj, You've a with good advice and showcased your faith as well. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/9/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/9/2021 2:23:00 AM
Loved your poem. Great advice. Best for a win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/9/2021 3:41:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/8/2021 11:04:00 AM
Nice take for this contest Christuraj..rhyming well... God bless.. Keep inspiring.. ~ Ani
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much.