Oriented

Heeding the cries of the poor and needy,
Feeding all when I have nothing plenty;
Kneading evil-doers who are weedy,
Pleading to the Almighty for bounty.

Greed, the great vice, be purged out of myself,
Freed from this life of bondage so tiresome;
Reed-like may Spirit flow on giving joys. 
Creed should not my existence overcome…



08 June 2021 
Lento - 8 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Hi Christuraj, You've a with good advice and showcased your faith as well. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Alex Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Loved your poem. Great advice. Best for a win.
Alex Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 3:41 AM
Thank you very much.
Jayasankar Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Nice take for this contest Christuraj..rhyming well... God bless.. Keep inspiring.. ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you very much.
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