Oriental Red

oriental red
all signs of autumn fall in;
orange shadows in line

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:21 PM
I enjoyed how you mixed these two similar bright colors of fall.
Song Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:52 PM
My fav time of yr, Russell...like an oriental rug of deep rich colours...great images for the audience. gwendolen
Song Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Dear lil cutesy Snapper, you are one adorable puppy! I didn't know you were the inspiration behind Russell's poetry!! I hope he will write some poetry dedicated JUST 2 U! Ps...my doggie named Sunny sends his regards...gwendolen
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July 16, 2012 at 2:04 PM
the marmalade of this season finds it beauty through your ku, russell!.. fine write as always!.. SOUP MAIL!..:)
Horne Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:56 PM
beautiful haiku, Russell
Williams Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Russell, a wonderful vision you portrayed here, I like your bio pic, your nose looks healthy ha ha...David
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July 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Enjoyed reading an early taste of autumn..Very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..I made a mistake on my poem about Poulter's Measure..If you care to look back and see the change..Sara
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