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I pine for your kisses for your touch, for your plundering arms, ........i pine.

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Date: 9/2/2009 3:15:00 PM
Amazing work
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:06:00 AM
I can see this on two levels, k k. Either as the longing for a loved one or the longing for the gentle touch of pine needles sweeping against your arms with their beautiful aroma. Very nice image! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2009 1:39:00 PM
smile...haiku...? pining for your kiss/your touch, your plundering arms/and so long I pine..Light & Love 5/7/5?
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:39:00 PM
this HAIKU SAYS IT ALL
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Date: 7/15/2009 1:12:00 PM
Very descriptive Haiku,K K. Sara
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