Organza

Written: November 13, 2025, for contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud *********** a wrench writhes 'round— threadbare grace in airscape light, tiara of twilight, at hubris' height, a bleak veil grief petioles evanesce at fate's command— burden without ballast, luster lost in catharsis
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Somadas Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Rich, enigmatic, and beautifully crafted.. Great win Sotto..
Alex Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 9:33 PM
"grief petioles evanesce at fate's command" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 5:43 PM
So beautiful. Soupmail for you
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:32 PM
I do so appreciate your vocabulary and your take on contest--unique but in a positive way. Liked: burden without ballast, luster lost in catharsis.
Narain Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Nce poem. GL in contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:54 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Organza" write. "Good Luck"  Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away............
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