'organized Thoughts'

a stranger caught his eye across the room turned his organized thoughts into chaos ©090420122030

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/20/2012 12:10:00 AM

what a nice poem to read,,,,, you have a great day Wilma ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:03:00 PM

Just reviewing some of your recent ones and remembering how much I liked this one. TIme sure flying, Wilma. I have to get up so early tomorrow. YUK.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/12/2012 4:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this piece today Wilma.)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2012 11:02:00 PM

Zowie! Me likes!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/9/2012 3:18:00 PM

Lol been there so many times I have my own seat. Lovely write Cape Town Honey. Luv n long hugs Michael

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/8/2012 6:38:00 PM

Hey that happened to me a few times in many places when she looked at me!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/8/2012 2:26:00 PM

Happy Easter, Wilma....there is much depth to this swell tetracyts...nice concept with the title as well which gives a chaotic feeling....While canoeing one beautiful day I was bitten by a dragonfly....Now my lil dragonfly will also nip you...You have now been officially BITTEN for Linda-Maries's contest...will u accept the challenge?...Love, Gwendolen