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'organized Thoughts'

a
stranger
caught his eye
across the room
turned his organized thoughts into chaos


©090420122030

confusiontetractys

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Debbie Duncan

September 20, 2012 at 12:10 AM

what a nice poem to read,,,,, you have a great day Wilma ;}

Andrea Dietrich

April 22, 2012 at 10:03 PM

Just reviewing some of your recent ones and remembering how much I liked this one. TIme sure flying, Wilma. I have to get up so early tomorrow. YUK.

Joe Maverick

April 12, 2012 at 4:39 PM

Enjoyed reading this piece today Wilma.)

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2012 at 11:02 PM

Zowie! Me likes!

Michael J. Falotico

April 9, 2012 at 3:18 PM

Lol been there so many times I have my own seat. Lovely write Cape Town Honey. Luv n long hugs Michael

Robert A. Dufresne

April 8, 2012 at 6:38 PM

Hey that happened to me a few times in many places when she looked at me!

Gwendolen Song

April 8, 2012 at 2:26 PM

Happy Easter, Wilma....there is much depth to this swell tetracyts...nice concept with the title as well which gives a chaotic feeling....While canoeing one beautiful day I was bitten by a dragonfly....Now my lil dragonfly will also nip you...You have now been officially BITTEN for Linda-Maries's contest...will u accept the challenge?...Love, Gwendolen

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