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Organic Fruits - Orchard Fantasy Contest


On a hike one day, I came upon a wild orchard,
ripe with lush fruit and I thought it was a mirage;
green apples, oranges, peaches and pears,
all grew in this fantastic place;
nectarines, plums, cherries and blueberries,
invited me to  l i n g e r  for awhile;
calmness settled all around . . . 

Fertilized by nature and unrestrained, 
ripe and  d r i p p  i n g  with sweetness;
utopia was mine as I gathered,
it would be a shame not to taste the fruit;
till I was full I ate the sweetness,
strange, I fell asleep- awoke and it was gone.

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August 15, 2016

Acrostic

Submitted to the contest, Orchard Fantasy
sponsor, Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:09 PM
wow, Constance this is divine. it used the acrostic words AND it ended up being a fantasy!! Save it. I am sure there is a contest it can be used for just around the corner!
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