Oreo Tears

She eats the cookies
She eats the cakes
She eats for sins sake
Spiced rum and frozen mars bars
She is addicted
Not to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 21, 2017 at 2:09 AM
Reading a few of your older poems and found this. Those first 4 lines in that chewing cadence. And then the apotheosis.... That is poetry.
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January 21, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Thank you so much Darren! :)
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December 13, 2014 at 8:53 PM
wow, I like this one even better. Loving food the way I do, it really speaks to me. gREAt and intriguing title too.
Vaso Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Andrea, I think we all love food!
Smith Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 5:27 AM
Never tried rum and mars bars...it sounds addicting
Vaso Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Rum, Cake and Love, all addicting! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 11:31 PM
A sweet treat! This one left a smile on my face in remembrance of when I used to be able to eat all the Oreo's I wanted!
Vaso Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Me too, even I still do!!
Nance Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 6:58 PM
how can anyone not be addicted to you, I know I am !
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December 13, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Oh la la Cas !!!
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