Oreo Tears

She eats the cookies She eats the cakes She eats for sins sake Spiced rum and frozen mars bars She is addicted Not to me

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Darren White

Date: 1/21/2017 2:09:00 AM

Reading a few of your older poems and found this. Those first 4 lines in that chewing cadence. And then the apotheosis.... That is poetry.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/21/2017 7:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Darren! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2014 8:53:00 PM

wow, I like this one even better. Loving food the way I do, it really speaks to me. gREAt and intriguing title too.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 10:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I think we all love food!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/13/2014 5:27:00 AM

Never tried rum and mars bars...it sounds addicting

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 10:04:00 PM

Rum, Cake and Love, all addicting! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/12/2014 11:31:00 PM

A sweet treat! This one left a smile on my face in remembrance of when I used to be able to eat all the Oreo's I wanted!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 10:03:00 PM

Me too, even I still do!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/12/2014 6:58:00 PM

how can anyone not be addicted to you, I know I am !

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/13/2014 10:03:00 PM

Oh la la Cas !!!