Ordinary Poem

Picking up the trash
I brush past you.

You say "mind the ice."

Underneath the concern---humor,
a mental picture
of my comic duck-walk.

Half way to the garage
I hear your voice again,
as if your throat
were joined to my belly.

You sing to yourself
as you fix a meal,
I feel your salty gravity
as a carnelian
dipped in my blood.

I carry you back to the kitchen
still singing in my breast.

At the sink,
you wash and kiss my cold fingers
as sotto voce, 
you reprise a song from ‘Frozen,’
while stirring hash in a skillet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:17 PM
You brought the relationship to life in your most interesting way. Thanks for your visit Eric.
Ashford Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Thank you Richard the nice comment, and you are very welcome.
Ferdous Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Dear Eric, not everyday will be like today, neither a poem like this. Thanks.
Ashford Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Hi Tamanna, that's very kind of you to say so. Obliged!
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