Ordinary Orange

life is but an orange full of pulp, seeds, beautiful sweet tasting soul hybridized over multiple generations the color slightly changes with also taste orange is still an orange full of pulp, seeds, beautiful sweet tasting soul when squeezed juices comes out understanding and with love except when spoiled 3/5/2016
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March 14, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, Sara, I love the way you said that the aroma lingers upon :) Thank you
Gupta Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Beautifully said: It is all orange "except when spoiled"..Congratulations....
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read my friend....Vlad.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve
Gorelick Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Congrats, original! BG
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Eve, lovely poem...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:12 AM
big congrats for your win. I really like how you approached this topic.
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:02 AM
- Eve, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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