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Ordered Degree of Chaos

AND one hand clapping against the shuttered storm cellar doors is never a reason to deny ability: like mushroom clouds as falling tears splatting fragments of dusted minds – by parched perched gills of neon fossils; the signs are here, there, and within the ? of a hungry-starved dying youth/ /-->the ordered degree of chaos! By opened minds the wheels turn As curving fanning windmills churn; Abrasions of mental collisions As rough as life and art (and smooth as death and data) as all atheist and scientist know who cares if the tree makes a sound when it dies AND I say “hello” to a black void but no reply, ergo: AVOID. :: 06-29-2017 ::

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Date: 8/6/2017 6:25:00 PM
This is great stuff! The flow and images i get from your words are amazing. Love this one.
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Ernest Robles
Date: 8/7/2017 6:14:00 AM
James, thank you so very kindly! I appreciate your comments so much and wishing you and yours a kind day! ~ E.P.
Date: 7/23/2017 10:53:00 AM
Hi Taai - i normally do not comment on the meaning of my own prose unless i see a way to not be too intrusive. the last stanza concerns the 'learned' and 'educated' fellows who do not believe in post-mortem survival. IF we choose to follow their logic and scientific method we too shall believe there is nothing after physical death; to say hello to this black void will never conjure a reply so please avoid the void.
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