Order of the Mind

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Order ... Is the Universe ... and the YOU-niverse Chaos is a ruse, a phantom A word we apply to that which is yet unmeasured or unexplained This knowledge, this perspective, is the nexus of mindfulness Balance in ALL things ... equity, harmony, stasis The symmetry of energy and effort Awareness and intent, finely adjusted Like a wolf running swift through its environs A myriad of senses and impulses, absorbed and sifted Auditory, olfactory, optical, and tactile Acting upon the synapses, sending signals Piquing the decision centers with instant adjustment, orientation One with its surroundings, an affinity with nature BE the wolf ... Listen, watch, perceive, feel, and adapt Take heed and measure of your immediate surroundings And the rest will take care of itself Be the master of the domain, You Expect only the control of your personal space But do so with concern, accuracy, and exceeding sensitivity Attuned to the element and circumstance of each moment While always focused and at peace from deep within That is surely what you will project to the world ... And most of what will return to you. ~ 7th Place ~ in the "Mindfulness" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/16/2019 3:49:00 PM

Fantastic imagery! Congratulations for your win :) xomo <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen!

P.M. Richter

Date: 2/15/2019 1:46:00 PM

Wise words my friend ~ well penned.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thank you so very much, PM - greatly appreciated! :-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/15/2019 1:21:00 PM

Hello Gregory R. Barden, meditation is good for the mind. It clears the actions of the day, and it is relaxing. I do this every night,to relax. Have a nice day my friend.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2019 11:29:00 PM

Indeed, it is, my friend, and well-said! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - blessings! :-) <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/15/2019 12:44:00 PM

being grounded and balanced is what mindful awareness is all about, and you remarkably stated it through this splendid write, G.... huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2019 11:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Nette, and I agree with your view completely ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3