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Order of the Mind

Order ...
          Is the Universe ... and the YOU-niverse
               Chaos is a ruse, a phantom
     A word we apply to that which is yet unmeasured or unexplained
This knowledge, this perspective, is the nexus of mindfulness

          Balance in ALL things ... equity, harmony, stasis
               The symmetry of energy and effort
     Awareness and intent, finely adjusted
Like a wolf running swift through its environs
          A myriad of senses and impulses, absorbed and sifted

               Auditory, olfactory, optical, and tactile
     Acting upon the synapses, sending signals
Piquing the decision centers with instant adjustment, orientation 
          One with its surroundings, an affinity with nature
               BE the wolf ...

     Listen, watch, perceive, feel, and adapt
Take heed and measure of your immediate surroundings
          And the rest will take care of itself
               Be the master of the domain, You
     Expect only the control of your personal space

But do so with concern, accuracy, and exceeding sensitivity
          Attuned to the element and circumstance of each moment
               While always focused and at peace from deep within
     That is surely what you will project to the world ...
And most of what will return to you.




~ 7th Place ~  in the "Mindfulness" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Fantastic imagery! Congratulations for your win :) xomo <3
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
Marc Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Wise words my friend ~ well penned.
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thank you so very much, PM - greatly appreciated! :-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Hello Gregory R. Barden, meditation is good for the mind. It clears the actions of the day, and it is relaxing. I do this every night,to relax. Have a nice day my friend.
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Indeed, it is, my friend, and well-said! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - blessings! :-) <3
Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 12:44 PM
being grounded and balanced is what mindful awareness is all about, and you remarkably stated it through this splendid write, G.... huggs
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, and I agree with your view completely ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3
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