Notes About The Poem

Orchids

colours' festival
       ~ wakes up imagination~
    by different smells

     the orchids parfum
        ~wild scent attraction for sense~
                          glamour to be seen

               rich food for many
  ~flying seeds taken somewhere~
               for a new onset
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Rolland Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:18 PM
beautiful poetry, delightful are orchids, have anice sunday
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 12:06 AM
Thank you Yann. Have a nice Sunday you too.
Volumes Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Oh my, what a wonderful set of Haikus. The presentation is lovely too. A well earned win Congratulations.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.!
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 6:44 PM
A lovely trio of haiku, Maria! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 12:06 AM
Thank you Kim.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Pretty pretty, Maria
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Thank you so much Andrea.
Anaya Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Stunning, Maria! So much imagery, happy to see it in the Haiku contest! ~I Am Anaya
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 12:09 AM
Thank you so much Anaya.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Hello Maria, I like flowers in different colors. My fav. is the orse. then the \lavender. good luck in the contest. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Hello Maria, good luck in the contest. Enjoy your day my friend. /Dar4lene\
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Thank you Darlene. I love all the flowers. Everyone one has much to say and so many different smels. Darlene, the contest are not important, but so good to keep me going. My kisses
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 12:37 PM
- Beautiful haikus about the orchid, Maria :) ... I posted about this beautiful plant yesterday for Constanse's contest :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Thank you Anne. it looks that we follow the same line. For me the contest is a challenge to keep on writing. And that is what I do. It´s not important to win or not, just keep there. Otherwise, I maybe don´t do anything. I wish you luck too Hugs
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