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Orchestra In Sunset Skies

Soft Wind music plays, 0n gold harp strings of Sunrays, Clouds in dance,hold hands.

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James Ray Morris

Date: 3/6/2010 12:44:00 PM

Interesting and curious images with this poem. Great job.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/5/2010 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful, Haiku, Charma! I especially like, ..."Clouds in dance, hold hands" Very good job!!! ..Peace, love, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 3/4/2010 2:06:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Charmaine, what a joy it would be to capture natures sounds and turn them into an orchestra >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:00:00 PM

this has an enchanting and pretty feel to it, Charma. So what language do you speak then? I ask becuase I had imagined you lived in the states. Your English seems good. Do people from your island speak Italian or something else? Or maybe you are English just living there? And do they have Maltese dogs there? hahaha. Luv, Andrea

James Peranteau

Date: 3/4/2010 12:43:00 PM

I can see this Charmaine, like a softly brushed painting...just beautiful ! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2010 12:08:00 PM

I am so happy your awesome poetry is among the poetry I am reading this afternoon Charmaine. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 9:16:00 AM

What a vision Charma... lovely lilting Haiku.. whimsical scene.. thankxx for your always special comments on my poetry today..luv.. your dear friend..forever.. Linda-Marie

Richard Pickett

Date: 3/4/2010 8:52:00 AM

Holding hands is nice...Great read. Thanks...Feeling better today...Taz

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/4/2010 8:52:00 AM

Everything in perfect timing , Charmaine ...

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/4/2010 8:31:00 AM

This is the Heavenly music we often hear in the wind as the sunrays become strings, and every cloud dances while lovers hold hands. This is very lovely, Charma...a tune I'd love to dance to! Good luck in the contest and may your inspiration never stop flowing. Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. Love and hugs, Andrew.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 3/4/2010 8:29:00 AM

This is simply beautiful! "Clouds in dance, hold hands" Such a warm and lovely feeling you share! :) x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2010 8:15:00 AM

This is just how I like to think of you, Charma, playing your golden harp on dancing clouds. You touched my heart with your haiku! Love, Carolyn