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Orchestra In Sunset Skies

Soft Wind  music plays,  
0n gold harp strings of Sunrays,                                                   
Clouds  in dance,hold hands.

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James Ray Morris

March 6, 2010 at 12:44 PM

Interesting and curious images with this poem. Great job.

Audrey Haick

March 5, 2010 at 6:54 AM

Beautiful, Haiku, Charma! I especially like, ..."Clouds in dance, hold hands" Very good job!!! ..Peace, love, Audrey

James Fraser

March 4, 2010 at 2:06 PM

Beautiful Haiku Charmaine, what a joy it would be to capture natures sounds and turn them into an orchestra >> James

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:00 PM

this has an enchanting and pretty feel to it, Charma. So what language do you speak then? I ask becuase I had imagined you lived in the states. Your English seems good. Do people from your island speak Italian or something else? Or maybe you are English just living there? And do they have Maltese dogs there? hahaha. Luv, Andrea

James Peranteau

March 4, 2010 at 12:43 PM

I can see this Charmaine, like a softly brushed painting...just beautiful ! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2010 at 12:08 PM

I am so happy your awesome poetry is among the poetry I am reading this afternoon Charmaine. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2010 at 9:16 AM

What a vision Charma... lovely lilting Haiku.. whimsical scene.. thankxx for your always special comments on my poetry today..luv.. your dear friend..forever.. Linda-Marie

Sean Kelly

March 4, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Everything in perfect timing , Charmaine ...

Richard Pickett

March 4, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Holding hands is nice...Great read. Thanks...Feeling better today...Taz

Andrew Crisci

March 4, 2010 at 8:31 AM

This is the Heavenly music we often hear in the wind as the sunrays become strings, and every cloud dances while lovers hold hands. This is very lovely, Charma...a tune I'd love to dance to! Good luck in the contest and may your inspiration never stop flowing. Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. Love and hugs, Andrew.