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Orcas

wild orcas
with an ocean as pool....
beach themselves

By; Joyce Johnson

Won first in pd's contest.

Copyright © Joyce Johnson | Year Posted 2012

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April 18, 2013 at 6:46 AM

A sand and tender reflection, Joyce. Great work.

March 23, 2012 at 2:54 PM

I really liked this one..Cograts..Sara

March 21, 2012 at 3:33 PM

A sad situation, but a lovely haiku. Congrats on your 1st place win, Joyce! Love, Kim

March 20, 2012 at 11:54 PM

Many congrats Joyce for this win.

March 20, 2012 at 5:47 PM

congrats Joyce, wonderful. harry

Poet Destroyer A

March 20, 2012 at 4:38 PM

Oh my Joyce, this is a very awesome image... don't know if this is a true haiku... but,how can you beat this image of orcas.. beaching themselves.. love it..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 5:44 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 4:49 PM

VERY good. I think I saw it before. really is one of your best. Congrats, sweet lady.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 8:22 PM

congrats Joyce on an awesome first place win for these splendid words luv..

March 16, 2012 at 6:07 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 16, 2012 at 5:32 PM

congrats on a shared 1st place! a vivid image of those wild orcas :-)

March 16, 2012 at 7:52 AM

Congrats on well deserved 1st place, Joyce. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:43 PM

JOYCE~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

February 20, 2012 at 12:27 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning one to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

February 20, 2012 at 9:12 AM

lovely haiku have a nice day ~always *P.D.

February 20, 2012 at 8:11 AM

Words match each other,Joyce.Well done!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 19, 2012 at 10:41 PM

A great haiku, Joyce. Hope you are having a great night. I see you have been inspired. I've enjoyed reading your work.

Andrea Dietrich

February 19, 2012 at 7:46 PM

OH YES, another great example of how a haiku is done!!! did you see that movie about the whales caught in ice? I plan to see it tomorrow.

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