Orca

Orca, killer whale,
Hunter in our blue oceans;
Swimming with the pack.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2009 5:01:00 AM

Beautiful creatures. I love to see them on tv. But their nature is to hunt and kill to eat. Keep writing. Sara

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/28/2009 7:39:00 PM

Whales are in their natural environment doing what they can to survive honestly ... and what is our dominion over them ... except for our gift of poetry? Fantastic

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/25/2009 1:04:00 AM

Clever write James, loved your website. Your poetic range is vast. I love to read your work. Keep enlightening us with your talent to write, I'm glad you found the soup...Raul

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/19/2009 3:46:00 PM

beautiful animal loved by some hunted by others nice piece my friend id love to see one close up not that close though thanks for the comment

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/18/2009 7:56:00 PM

Killers they are but beautiful creatures. Nice job James. You have soup mail. Nate

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/18/2009 4:28:00 PM

They are killers but man are they magnificent to observe...their means of communicating fascinates me..good work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/18/2009 4:15:00 PM

I certainly agree with Karen. Whales are amazing creatures -- smart, elegant and strong. Perhaps an Orca will appear at the bow of my boat one day! Would love to catch a glimpse of one. Outstanding Haiku, James! Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/18/2009 4:11:00 PM

Whales have always fascinated me. That they are so graceful despite their size is a wonder. Nature's beauty--one can't beat it. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Karen

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