orbiting the pine

moravian star silver glitters atop tree golden garland waves grace evergreen free-spirited ornaments amaze the windows of the soul all eyes orbit ‘round blinking pine lights call the family near so dear it’s Christmas this year
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Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Sharma  Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Awh, this is such a beautiful description about the Christmas ambience, so whimsical and profound in every way, especially "moravian star silver glitters atop tree golden garland waves grace evergreen", "windows of the soul" and "all eyes orbit" Absolutely breathtaking, dear Kim.. A gorgeous write, loved reading this :) a FAV
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Sharma!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Sharma!
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