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orbiting the pine

moravian star silver glitters atop tree golden garland waves grace evergreen free-spirited ornaments amaze the windows of the soul all eyes orbit ‘round blinking pine lights call the family near so dear it’s Christmas this year

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2023 6:22:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/23/2023 7:46:00 PM

Awh, this is such a beautiful description about the Christmas ambience, so whimsical and profound in every way, especially "moravian star silver glitters atop tree golden garland waves grace evergreen", "windows of the soul" and "all eyes orbit" Absolutely breathtaking, dear Kim.. A gorgeous write, loved reading this :) a FAV

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2023 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, Sharma!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2023 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sharma!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/23/2023 5:06:00 PM

I loved this--orbiting around the pine...well said. I especially liked free-spirited ornaments amaze the windows of the soul. This a poetic beauty that I must fave, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2023 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!