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Orbital Shift

Spiralling salvation suffocating choice The chances of redemption choking on the noise Airwaves of the future set to make it last The sense of all sedition is slipping on the past Never one to help that I would be revealed Express that we are nothing with illusive shields The future comes around to breathe the words of end And suddenly what happened is not the current trend Waking to the reason of revealing reason Awakening the passion for the current season Awaking to desires for awareness of our worth The universe is all as I understand the earth The stars are all around me within everything The gravity we are will never let me sink Suddenly her eyes remind me of the light With darker orbits gone she pulls me from the night Universal silence knows just what we are Speak or keep your peace, it all takes us so far Spinning through the darkness drifting into space My sun is in the centre, as I spiral into place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 4:39:00 PM
Neat opening alliteration and couplet rhyming... excellent phrasing and imagery. Well done Ian! Best wishes, Keith
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