Orb

mysterious orb
of blazing silvery beams
long may you dazzle

moonsilverhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 2, 2015 at 9:10 PM

lovely imagery, enjoyed your write *luv p.d.

Shadow Hamilton

July 11, 2015 at 8:30 AM

ty Linda hugs

Constance La France

June 30, 2015 at 2:18 PM

Shadow, lovely haiku 7 and thanks for my wonderful placement in your haiku contest, I am so honored

Shadow Hamilton

July 11, 2015 at 8:31 AM

you earned your place with your lovely haiku Connie ty for enjoying this hugs

Andrea Dietrich

June 30, 2015 at 1:46 PM

soupmail for ya

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Nice one, Shadow. An example of traditional haiku for us. I am at my in-laws for the week and got a bit of time to come here.It's so nice to see a few poems!

Shadow Hamilton

June 28, 2015 at 6:57 PM

ty Andrea hope you are enjoying your break hugs

Carrie Richards

June 27, 2015 at 10:14 AM

You dazzle with words !! :).......!!! Thank you very much for all your encouragement Shadow. I am honored with the recent placement in your contest !! Thanks so much!

Shadow Hamilton

June 28, 2015 at 6:57 AM

ty Carrie you are welcome hugs