Orange Sea

Swells of auburn hills,
Osculate the cobalt sky;
Romance of the Fall.

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Sara Kendrick

December 29, 2010 at 7:34 AM

Good one..So descriptive that it is almost like being there..Sara

Misty Penton-Leccese

December 14, 2010 at 1:32 PM

What a beautiful image that you have put into the minds of your reads Raul. I can just imagine the hills and the sky. Lots of Love, ~Misty Leccese~

Iolanda Scripca

November 21, 2010 at 9:46 PM

Hi Raul. I nice love story between sky and Earth in Fall. Happy Holidays, Raul!

Justin Hensley

November 20, 2010 at 3:12 PM

Man Raul, you make me miss home. this poem very much reminds me of the fall during sun rise and sun set off this hills in teh valley where i lived during school. Very beautiful the title is so Strong i love it.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 18, 2010 at 8:42 PM

Dear Sensei Raul, I saw YOU were online so I'm here to say Superb Haiku as usual Hope this finds YOU and YOURS in Great Health and High Spirits How are YOU my Brother POET I am a Premium Member now Have YOU read any of my 5 blogs I sponsored a contest probably my only one I'm not a good Judge I think they are all Winners Good to see YOU again Keep in Touch LOVE ALWAYS...Harry (HG)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Tender picture u painted in creative words Raul.. lovely Fall Romance indeed ..the best kind.. hope u are doing well ..be blessed on this happy day with luv..