Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

Orange Pumpkin Sat

Orange pumpkin sat
Upon dining room table
Sliced by long sharpe knife
"Twas spicy brown on inside
Frosting and icing cream cheese  

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Jack Horne October 10, 2012 at 9:31 AM sounds like that pumpkin will taste good - Mum will have to wait till next Halloween for mine, lol

Russell Sivey October 9, 2012 at 5:04 PM This is a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed every line of this incredible poem! What a delightful piece this write is, Great Work!!

Stephen Parker October 9, 2012 at 4:11 PM I like the dual splice in this tanka. The carved pumpkin and the pumpkin cake or pie topping in the last line. It is a tasty verse that salivates the palate.