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Orange Pumpkin Sat

Orange pumpkin sat Upon dining room table Sliced by long sharpe knife "Twas spicy brown on inside Frosting and icing cream cheese
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/10/2012 9:31:00 AM
sounds like that pumpkin will taste good - Mum will have to wait till next Halloween for mine, lol
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Date: 10/9/2012 5:04:00 PM
This is a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed every line of this incredible poem! What a delightful piece this write is, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/9/2012 4:11:00 PM
I like the dual splice in this tanka. The carved pumpkin and the pumpkin cake or pie topping in the last line. It is a tasty verse that salivates the palate.
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