Orange Haiku

Orange ball seems to play Hide and seek with trees and lake Sea green water snake

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Warren Doll

Date: 8/21/2024 7:52:00 AM

Karen. great haiku and great imagery~ Warren

Karen Jones
Date: 8/21/2024 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for reading Warren!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/10/2024 11:54:00 AM

Interesting Karen that the first two lines could be separate or together. Smiling!!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/10/2024 12:12:00 PM

Thanks for reading and keep smiling

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/7/2024 8:23:00 PM

This could be trouble. I guess no one should chase the ball into a snake filled lake. Your few words create a great picture.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/8/2024 12:26:00 AM

lol thanks