orange haiku

orange ball seems to play
hide and seek with trees and lake
sea green water snake
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Doll Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Karen. great haiku and great imagery~ Warren
Jones Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Thank you for reading Warren!
Beaufort Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Interesting Karen that the first two lines could be separate or together. Smiling!!
Jones Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Thanks for reading and keep smiling
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 8:23 PM
This could be trouble. I guess no one should chase the ball into a snake filled lake. Your few words create a great picture.
Jones Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:26 AM
lol thanks
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