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An orange fireball so new Peeks around the naked trees As seen through the window view Beyond is hoary grass freeze
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/1/2023 6:09:00 PM
Love the image and the rhyme, Sara. Peace, Gershon
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2023 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 12/29/2022 7:36:00 PM
Made quite an impact…2 poems worth :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2022 2:43:00 AM
Kim, A beautiful sunrise after some long cloudy days and no sun. Thanks for the kind review. Sara
Date: 12/28/2022 9:50:00 PM
I like the contrast of the fireball and the grass freeze, also great imagery of peeking around the naked trees, well done!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2022 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle. You read right through the lines. Sara
Date: 12/28/2022 4:31:00 PM
great little image you wrote and also showed us here, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2022 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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