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Orange Fireball

  An orange fireball so new
Peeks around the naked trees
As seen through the window view
Beyond is hoary grass freeze
   


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Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022

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January 1, 2023 at 6:09 PM

Love the image and the rhyme, Sara. Peace, Gershon

January 2, 2023 at 4:30 AM

Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the visit. Sara

December 29, 2022 at 7:36 PM

Made quite an impact…2 poems worth :)

December 30, 2022 at 2:43 AM

Kim, A beautiful sunrise after some long cloudy days and no sun. Thanks for the kind review. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

December 28, 2022 at 9:50 PM

I like the contrast of the fireball and the grass freeze, also great imagery of peeking around the naked trees, well done!

December 29, 2022 at 4:29 AM

Thank you, Michelle. You read right through the lines. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2022 at 4:31 PM

great little image you wrote and also showed us here, Sara.

December 29, 2022 at 4:25 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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