Orange Crush the Adventures of Soda Pop Viii

If you are reading "the Adventures of Soda Pop" for the first time, read the first in the series and the story will make more sense. I hope you enjoy.

Ricky ran up the stairs to go to his room to prepare for the days fun. He put on his favorite pair of jeans and a western shirt with pearl buttons. From under his bed he pulled out a leather gun belt that held two cap guns. (apparently the monsters vacate the space under the bed during the day) As he strapped the belt around his waist, I could tell he liked how it felt on his hips. Ricky took one of the guns out of the holster and placed it back under the bed. At first I wondered why and before I knew it Ricky placed me upsidedown in the holster. I liked how the leather held me firmly in place, luckily I had been corked or Ricky would have been wearing purple instead of blue jeans. Ricky then started rummaging through his closet looking for his Daisy BB gun. After a few moments of searching he was happily holding it in his little hands. He shook it and I could hear the BBs rolling around inside the gun.

As Ricky walked down the stairs I could feel his imagination taking hold. Ricky felt as tall and powerful as any real cowboy. There was a certain coolness in his stride, if he had had on some cowboy boots instead of his black canvas runners, the picture would have been perfect. Ricky went into the kitchen to find Roy and Teresa, Mrs. Burns told him they had already left with some friends. No worries after all today Ricky was the "Lone Ranger" and I was Tonto! The adventure could begin.
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Deschler Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 2:31 AM
Let the fun begin, Rick. I am looking forward to more wonderful adventures with Soda Pop!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Thanks Kelly.
Meade Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:18 AM
"Come on, Silver! Let's go, big fellow! Hi-yo Silver! Away!" Love this adventure, Of course the Lone Ranger was a fellow Texan! Keep writing Kemo Sabe!!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:45 AM
I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 6:00 PM
I am riveted by these write Rick ... waits impatiently for the next installment! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Jan.
Farley Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Very captivating. I like it.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Samantha.
Vaso Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Wow, now this could lead into so many directions, great!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:12 AM
I think you will like what I'm coming up with.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 4:59 PM
hmmm, i wonder if this is leading to the time that the poor soda bottle perhaps gets shot! In any event, a very cute description of the bottle in the holster.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Andrea, more to come!
Callus Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Keep these lovely writes coming, Richard; you have us hooked! Ricky reminds me of myself, in a way. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Thanks Paul, I'm pleased you are enjoying my little story.
Yvonne Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:23 AM
I found it oh so touching that Ricky replaced one of his six shooters to fit Soda Pop in his gun belt. Love this story, I can't wait for the next one and the day you announce it will be published.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Maurice!
Kiser Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 11:06 PM
The lone ranger and his sidekick, Tonto; ride again...and again...and again. Your pop bottle takes me back to my childhood.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Thanks M.L.
Curtis Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 6:21 PM
That's pretty cool, it reminds me of my brother and me in our childhood
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 8:22 AM
I was a little kid in the 60's.
Chircop Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 12:28 PM
: ) The lone ranger and tonto..I really loved that.Very entertaining Rick..Charma.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Charmaine.
Smith Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Fabulous Richard...keep them coming
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Tim.
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