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orange on a tree sweetly tempts a honey bee. . . . he leaves her hanging

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:28:00 PM
PS... THE BEE MUST HAD BEEN MALE... HOW DARE HE FORGETS HOW SWEET IT IS TO BE WANTED...SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:27:00 PM
ORANGE YOU GLAD, I AM BACK...LOL....
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Date: 11/26/2014 8:39:00 AM
...leaves her hanging..we to carrots Andrea. so clever you are. adding it to favlist. This haiku is 111/100. Love sweet Andrea.RAJAT
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Date: 8/22/2014 9:46:00 PM
Andrea This is so creative with a last line that could mean different things, letting the reader use their imagination. Thank you for the great comment on my Quotes poem.
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:38:00 AM
love this, boy what a juxtapose...no wonder it was a winner...
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:56:00 PM
aha I remember this one from the oranges or apples haiku contest! it was a winner then and now, congrats andrea :-)
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place with with this engaging haiku filled with humorous wit.
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:50:00 AM
I love the double meaning in the last line. a dramatic ending! also, how it rhymes so smoothly. congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:32:00 AM
What a cute one!! (hmmm....don't think we are talking of the bee in that last line!!) :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:02:00 AM
CONGRATS MY FRIEND ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations,Andrea!
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:09:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 5:13:00 AM
Howdy Andrea. This is one sweeeet haiku. I love the final line that seals it with a kiss! Just superb! I am beginning to enjoy haikus more and more as I read yours here! It'd be great to have a tatalizing picture attached to this one. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:15:00 AM
wonderful play on words Andrea, superb haiku. Missed everyone's work here while I was away, so good to read again.
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:00:00 AM
Andrea, stopping by to say hi **!:-) .Congratulations on your any haiku will do for me contest., :-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem. And not adding your name on the bottom,, (JOKE) I had over 15 poems with their names attached,,,Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:56:00 AM
nice win! Orange you glad you entered? Ok, I'll quit with the Orange jokes!:)
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Date: 6/18/2011 2:27:00 AM
Orange you supposed to be checkin' your soup mail? Cus' I sent you a freshly squeezed reply. but if you read it too quickly, the juice might spill over into your eye! Ouch! :) btw Seven on your Orange Poem,cus it was cool as ice...and I DIDN'T just read it twice dear, I had to read it Thrice, and dang that orange was Nice. and now my poem is starting to bite, bite and nice don't rhyme right, but I guess that shitAke's alright, won't you have a bite tonite, now I'll stop w/the Writes! bye
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Date: 5/28/2011 11:56:00 PM
so fine,so fine, andrea... sweet round of applause to you for a happy win!
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Date: 5/28/2011 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on this one buddy!
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a super win in Carol's contest ..another beauty luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:46:00 PM
Oh those bees...lol...congrats my dear. BG
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:14:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Andrea
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Date: 5/28/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...a very sweet haiku..and how the honey bee is left hanging...a lovely weekend to you , gautami
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