Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Haiku

orange

peel me an orange
sweet reward beneath the pith~
life's like an orange







ContestA fruity haiku
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Contest Judged: June 13th, 2025 4:54:00 PM
Placement: Third

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Tania Kitchin June 14, 2025 at 11:17 AM Maclawrence, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku. Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 14, 2025 at 12:03 PM Thanks Tania.

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2025 at 12:38 AM Ahhh great job and last line so meaningful. Congrats Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 14, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thanks a million.