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Oracles of the Soul Premiere Contest Winner

From the eyes of every soldier Reflection of blood and death From the eyes of a rich man Seeker of power and wealth From the eyes of every sailor Sailing all waves of life From the eyes of a widower Mourning his dear precious wife From the eyes of old age Sorcerer of all secrets hidden From the eyes of every parent Who find glory in their children From the eyes of every lover Blooming like buds of spring From the eyes of every believer One devotion to his worshiping. From the eyes of every human In laughter, happiness and pain From the eyes of splendid Nature Where rainbows grace from sun and rain. Deep into all eyes Lies the Universe’s core The oracles of the soul. TOP WIN :) :) EYES POETRY CONTEST Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 2/6/2021 7:07:00 PM
So glad to find this wonderful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ love how you wrapped it up with your last stanza. Well done ~
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:20:00 PM
I love the cosmic feel and the ideas of connection. Very lovely.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/9/2018 11:34:00 PM
Thanks dear :)
Date: 6/9/2018 5:41:00 AM
Ahh, such a lovely poem this is, everything about it is perfect, many congratulations on your 1st position in the contest, it is indeed a beauty
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/9/2018 11:35:00 PM
Thanks Faraz :)
Date: 6/4/2018 7:41:00 AM
Hello Natasha, Congratulations on your Top Win with this quite marvelous free verse of yours. I really like your view and take on this theme which has definite metaphorical and metaphysical overtones, plus a demonstrable touch of the cosmic from the three verses in the final stanza of your poem. Outstanding Work!! A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:47:00 AM
What a beautiful msg. Thanks Gary :)
Date: 5/20/2018 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win, Natasha! Loved the great fluidity to your poem.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 5/20/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Ed :)
Date: 5/19/2018 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A beautiful poem.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 5/20/2018 1:59:00 AM
I'm so happy! Thanks dear :)
Date: 5/19/2018 9:03:00 PM
Awesome poem, Natasha. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 5/20/2018 1:59:00 AM
Feeling awesome :) Thanks Line :)
Date: 5/19/2018 8:38:00 PM
Hi Natasha, Congrats on this great poem and well deserved top honors Anthony
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Natasha Turner
Date: 5/20/2018 2:02:00 AM
Thanks Anthony. I'm over the moon! :)

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