Poetic Form: Senryu Inspired: 2024 March 04 Image: N/A
a hill stream flowing a bottom lake fulfilling a near sea rising a hill stream in want a bottom lake where they flaunt the sea that boys taunt a boy wades in stream kids by a lake play tag team the sea is a dream a stream in a rush a lake dangerously rises rough seas off the shore a stream rips its banks a bottom lake overflows a nearby sea floods trees fall in the stream lake closed signs flap everywhere angry storm moves in
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