Or else, spring comes soon to part
That man’s alluring,
To lovely lass enchanting.
That poem moves heart
Which, to readers appealing,
Or else, spring comes soon to part!
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Tanka |15.07.2023| poetry, man
Poet’s note: Based on a shloka in Sanskrit:
Ramaneeya sa hi purusho ramanee yatra eva rajyate vidagdhaa |
Shlokah sa eva subhagah chittam saktam hee yatra rasikasya ||
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