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Opulent Relic Meander

The sensitive brilliance of a lighted flame. Yet, filled by vitality, will spark and inflame. I had been ashes, encouraged by your presence. At first, faint flares, yet before long propel us. Utterly, we were talented to a calm rumble. I was interested in the brilliant shade fettle. Applauds such warm and compassionate eyes. I don't cognize how you'll harm me in disguise. Love sprouts as auld as the roses bloom in June. The gathering happiness under the halcyon moon. The people of yore wrote in regards to romance. We were unable to strive to conceal our happiness. The fire was quenched by nightfall. Relics degraded to an opulent sprawl.
Written: October 22, 2021
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Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Lovely writing, Lasaad.
Skelly Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful images...Delice
Goldsmith Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Your "Opulent Relic Meander" is a wonderful sonnet. A pretty flower picture. Wish I was waking in this garden. Have a blessed autumn day.....................
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 3:07 AM
Your lines are so very beautiful in this Sonnet. I enjoyed reading them, Lasaad.
Poet Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you so much Jenna, appreciate your kind words. Be blessed
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Rose blooms in June--halcyon moon--so many images and emotions you convey in this poem, Lasaad.
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October 24, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness and kind words, Vijay.
Horsman Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 2:30 AM
The warmth of the whole sonnet you bring to the reader, very skilful.
Poet Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Thank you so much Harry, your comment means a lot to me.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 1:36 AM
Wonderful sonnet. I wonder where you studied literature.
Poet Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Thank you so much, Victor your kind words mean a lot to me.
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