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The sensitive brilliance of a lighted flame. Yet, filled by vitality, will spark and inflame. I had been ashes, encouraged by your presence. At first, faint flares, yet before long propel us. Utterly, we were talented to a calm rumble. I was interested in the brilliant shade fettle. Applauds such warm and compassionate eyes. I don't cognize how you'll harm me in disguise. Love sprouts as auld as the roses bloom in June. The gathering happiness under the halcyon moon. The people of yore wrote in regards to romance. We were unable to strive to conceal our happiness. The fire was quenched by nightfall. Relics degraded to an opulent sprawl.
Written: October 22, 2021

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Date: 11/1/2021 1:30:00 PM
Lovely writing, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/27/2021 9:58:00 AM
Beautiful images...Delice
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Date: 10/25/2021 10:44:00 AM
Your "Opulent Relic Meander" is a wonderful sonnet. A pretty flower picture. Wish I was waking in this garden. Have a blessed autumn day.....................
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Date: 10/24/2021 3:07:00 AM
Your lines are so very beautiful in this Sonnet. I enjoyed reading them, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Jenna, appreciate your kind words. Be blessed
Date: 10/23/2021 6:23:00 AM
Rose blooms in June--halcyon moon--so many images and emotions you convey in this poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness and kind words, Vijay.
Date: 10/23/2021 2:30:00 AM
The warmth of the whole sonnet you bring to the reader, very skilful.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Harry, your comment means a lot to me.
Date: 10/23/2021 1:36:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet. I wonder where you studied literature.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor your kind words mean a lot to me.

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