Opulence

opulence in my sails ~ titanic dreams AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on August 5, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (18) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2020 3:12:00 AM

Very clever. I'm not a great fan of haiku but this could easily convert me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2020 8:14:00 AM

Thant's a wonderful compliment, Gary~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:50:00 AM

Dang!! just HM! I loved this, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2020 8:17:00 AM

thanks, Andrea ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:49:00 AM

Now THIS is outstanding work. Did it not win??? Gotta go see.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2020 8:17:00 AM

Most appreciated ~

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2020 1:44:00 PM

That is quite creative, Line! gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thanks, Paul ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2020 11:07:00 AM

Love this one Line, we all have those titanic dreams, it spurs us on. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tom.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/6/2020 10:23:00 AM

Nice one. God bless you dear friend

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Regina ~

Carole Duet

Date: 8/6/2020 2:13:00 AM

Love this little haiku, Line. It reminds me of my son who just finished building his own sailboat. He definitely has those "titanic dreams". Carole :D

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2020 7:48:00 AM

Wow awesome feat ~