Opulence

opulence
in my sails
~ titanic dreams



AP: 1st place 2020

Submitted on August 5, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (18) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention

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Gary Radice

August 9, 2020 at 3:12 AM

Very clever. I'm not a great fan of haiku but this could easily convert me.

Line Gauthier

August 9, 2020 at 8:14 AM

Thant's a wonderful compliment, Gary~

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2020 at 11:50 AM

Dang!! just HM! I loved this, Line.

Line Gauthier

August 9, 2020 at 8:17 AM

thanks, Andrea ~

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2020 at 11:49 AM

Now THIS is outstanding work. Did it not win??? Gotta go see.

Line Gauthier

August 9, 2020 at 8:17 AM

Most appreciated ~

Paul Callus

August 6, 2020 at 1:44 PM

That is quite creative, Line! gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2020 at 2:58 PM

Thanks, Paul ~

Tom Cunningham

August 6, 2020 at 11:07 AM

Love this one Line, we all have those titanic dreams, it spurs us on. Tom

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2020 at 2:58 PM

Thank you very much, Tom.

Regina Mcintosh

August 6, 2020 at 10:23 AM

Nice one. God bless you dear friend

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2020 at 2:59 PM

Thanks, Regina ~

Carole Duet

August 6, 2020 at 2:13 AM

Love this little haiku, Line. It reminds me of my son who just finished building his own sailboat. He definitely has those "titanic dreams". Carole :D

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2020 at 7:48 AM

Wow awesome feat ~